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Old 09-02-04, 11:05 PM   #8
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Voted For: *LoYaLiTy™!

1st verse dint really have any punches that connected,some self glorification in your verse did'nt help...work on your structure,n elevate your punches...2nd verse i liked your closer but the rest was average but good structure n flow overall betta drop.......
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