Voted For: konfuzed

this had like a poetic feel to it which was real hott...........the style reminds me of jay two........i liked the metaphores in this one....the verse lacked personals and multies but i can understand that because of the style u wrote it in it would be kind of hard to fit multies.......but overall i was feelin this verse......

On the other hand.....the other verse had poor structure first off....there'd be one short line and a stretched line following which made the flow choppy.......both verses had poor vocab but the lines konfused had were worded better.....this verse lacked any hard-hitting puches or ne thing clever.....it was simple and required no thought....with that said i vote for Konfuzed