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Old 09-03-04, 05:27 AM   #12
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Voted For: SoLe

Aim-the-steel at your frame and damage-ya-cyphers/
Burn "Legend"-like-lighters, ruine Your "web" like amature-spiders/
Cool Start 7/10
Legend-is-a-slut, no experience in rap…I’m sick-of-these-mutts/
And my bullets help you get through cuz they stick-to-ya-guts/
Nice punch 7/10
I’ll X -ya-name-out of this rap game…so please-try-ducking/
Your death was official the moment u pressed the
"accept battle button"/
NICE 8/10
I'm gonna pound-ya-face untill my knuckles-are-breaking'
I keep "heat" around-my-waist like belt buckles-from-satan
nice lol 6.5/10
RaW Finisher.....

Dont need 2 be 100 barz of personals cuz mine actually comes from MY chest/
I'll put my foot in ya Ass jus so ya can say ya walked wit’ the best...

LOLOLOL 8/10 nice closer


u got red beams aiming at ya dome
telling u to go home and leave this rap shit alone
decent 5/10
cause when we battle i own u like bank loans
ya punchlines have no signal like cellphones
Nice 7/10
ya ran outta lyrics so go get ya writer
wrap u up with my punchlines like a lyrical spider
6/10
lyrics talk back to me like kit does in knight rider
uppercut ya ass like ryu off of streetfighter
bout to blow ya brain with syntex explosives
brown stains in ya pants like ya ass was corrosive
have ya heart jumping out ya chest like bread in a toaster...losing ya lunch like u got of a roller coaster
45 take ya body and ya sole...meat cleaver to ya neck throw ya head in a hole...have ya bitch butter me up like cinnamon rolls
stuff ya body in the freezer til it gets cold
tech spot ya ass up like bread with mold
nine leave ya head knocked off for ya girl to hold
i'll have ya dna splatter all over ya denim jeans
i'll have ya death look like u o'd on anphedamines
gonna expose ya weakness leave u dead in a ditch
body so mangled up look like u got thrown off a cliff
cut a hole in ya body have em open up like gills on a fish
i done merked u nigga so u off of my checklist




okay Nice Multis Sole, Punchlines were good from both nice wordplay, Livin Should fix his structure a bit tho Other then that this was a good battle but i give it to Sole for Better Punchlines
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