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Old 09-03-04, 05:27 AM   #10
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Voted For: Spektikul

both verses were good but like i said before played verses....diesel came with a played verse basic line no multies to metaphores no hard-hitting punches, but the verse was structured right and it almost flowed but words cant describe how sick i get reading these..the vocab also lacked....overall i'd give this a 2/10 ten being ok

as for the other verse i didnt mind readin this....it flowed well and came together good i liked the personals in every line......if you gonna drop a verse drop multies personal nameplay wordplay structure it well make sure it paint a pictue in the voters head.....if you do that you'll get a ten....but seeing as you cam closer to perfection then diesel did i'll vote for you......
sorry diesel....elev-8-shun
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