Voted For: Unrealghost

::Breakdown::
He Calls out n i accept dayum never Should-Have
makes 3 threads about me ha, i had a good-laugh
good multi attemp.....6/10
A Wack Rapper fits perfect with a Wak Name, Keen2B
Cause the fact is i own u thats what it Seems-To-Be
personal....7/10
Ur Open Mics are shit, im surprised u wrote-it
Even if u was a master u still coudnt Promote-shyt
didnt get it 6/10
The Ghost just merkd u, sending Chills-down-ya-spine
i dont need skills battling u ,cuz Kill-Nouns-like-Mimes
good finisher....8/10

i was feelin most of you verse the style was original but everyone does it so im not gonna hate.......i liked the peronal and the finisher......u made good attempts at multi's the whole verse.....and u kept it short and sweet......
Overall=27/40

I come to battle/I come to do war/Iv come to pileage,leave bodies dead on the floor/UNREAL u want to fuck wit me/then go right ahead/as soon as ur finished,ima split open ur head/
with my samurai sword i keep over my bed/I keep it for emergency's like when old girlfriends try to fill me with lead/ for cheaten and sleepin with their best friends instead/so how u tryn a mess with me when im already wanted dead/ iv nothen to loose im at the very edge/ima bout to snap and break ur back/UNREAL will jesus ressurect u when u dead!

the reason u didnt win this battle was because u didnt come with any multis or real punch-lines.......u need them to win battles.....second reason was your verse didnt flow and it was real choppy, which means work on your rhyme scheme,third think u need to do i work on structure....not really important but u wanna represent your verse good so its easy to read......fourth and final reason why u lost is vocab.....ur not gonna win battle with basic words like hi bye guy why sigh fri my lie try even though they rhyme there simple.....some advice start reading......
24/40
Vote:Unrealghost