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Voted For: $ik
siks lines had metaphores....metaphores beat basic rhyming, and in the last line sik had a personal and a metaphore compined in one line....complex rhyming always beats basic rhymin..its a known fact....thats the reason why illuson didnt win.....u gotta come harder then that basic stuff use mettaphores ex.
'beatin me in a battle is like foldin concrete'-metaphore
see now ya know....next time come a lil harder.....my vote-Sik
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return the favor and dont dickride vote either illuson like u did last time.....vote honest
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