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Voted For: Tha Flash
damn took me like 5 minutes to read but overall.......i think wrekage took the personals category........his flow was ok style was original nothin really creative....had a couple of complex lines ......didnt really have a nice finisher....his vocab was mediocre....structure was ok...so overall her didnt do so bad
your verse had so nice metaphores...im glad to see that....had good flow.....structure was ok......didnt really see ne multies from any verse....your vocab was slightly better then wrekages.....you had better punches then your last battle which is a good improvement....u came harder and more powerful this time....and despit the fact u dropped 400 lines u still stayed on top of everything and kept a good pace and for that i think you should get ym vote......
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