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Old 09-03-04, 07:37 AM   #7
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Voted For: Tha Flash

nigga now u know i'm metaphorically crazy
i'll have u wandering off after ya loss like ya eye was lazy
nice 7/10
i got devastating punches that will rock ya jaw
and leave u with bad news like a doctors call
nice 6/10
so nigga stop the frontin
or i'll carve a face in ya body like a halloween pumpkin
u record means nothing
decent 4.5/10
i'll still crush ya lyrics
and shove a blade in ya throat that will crush ya larynx
kinda un even 6/10
i'm brushing my losses off
and i'm back up in it
i roll ya dead body over in the ground like cingular's back up minutes
good 6/10
and i'm aiming to leave ya ass without a plan
and leave u a myth just like the abominable snow man
nyce7/10
u can't cling to what i spit
cause my lines are sick i'll blow ya head off with no care
and leave ya ass soft like the downy snuggle bear
decent 5/10
u can't beat me cause i'm equipped for more things
and u can't hurt me so it's like i'm sipping on morphine
dont get it 3/10
and ya flow seems to be a wreckage itself
so i'm gonna leave u like a chicken straight pecking ya self
nice 6/10
i advise u to watch ya shit
cause i steal ya dream and put where my pockets sit
u think u hot but u not cause i'll rock u bitch
i'll leave ya ass swollen up with bruises the size of popcicle sticks
i got a glock on my waist and when i reach for it you'll think my pockets itch
so i'm gonna spring ya sprockets and launch ya ass in the air like a rocket bitch
and leave u dead body under water like u was with a lot of fish
lol nice multies 8/10
u think u good but my glock will raise hell
and leave echoes of my verse in ya ear like u was a seashell
ehh decent 5/10
so go step ya rap game up before u come back here
cause next time i'll chew u up quicker then tyson did holyfield's ear

Played 4/10

I'have'already'taken a picture of my spine,
So when U lose,U can Go-back wit' that"flash-back"
didnt rhyme 1/10

"Let's Prtend this is "NFS" Cuz'IM'Puttin'you'underground,
In a "isolated" box, Wit'no'sound//
decent 5/10
You look into the mirror'Lift your shirt, You was flashed', I will make sure your the first "fag" That gets bashed//
lol 6/10
U try to "smash" Newb's you aint' No "jesus",
Slap the bible in your "Face" U shrivel In shame like-Ice-2-penis//
sucked 2/10
Chip-teeth'Break nose's I make it work,
U hoppin' In my ring, With this mic, damn U still wearin your skirt//
nice closer 6/10



Punches: The flash- i seed lots but was kinda weak


the structure sucked on tha flash, u shud make it more evend out



Wrekages opener i didnt like cause it didnt rhyme
Tha Flah's closer was played
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