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Old 09-03-04, 07:55 AM   #6
keen2B
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that was tight nite wreckage
good ryhme
good stucture
most off all wreck when i was readen it i was feeling it
so id give 9/10
i felt though the last verse was a under the first 3 i liked the "impress-shen"
bit that was heavy

safe..
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