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Old 09-03-04, 09:39 AM   #18
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your verse was ok....it was good solid....flowed well as i read it structured well.....it was original though....it lacked multies and complexity to it but other then that it had some solid attempts at a punch and i think there was one metaphore....(brain surgeon) or somethin like that but ne way....you had a good verse.....
on the other hand shotty's verse was more complex and it flowed better.....he had stronger vocab and more hard-hitting punches then you did.....his verse was structured well.....
and he used a creative style which was also what seperated this battle....my vote:Shotty