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Old 09-03-04, 09:57 AM   #12
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Voted For: Tha Flash

kahdaffi.......

your verse was ok it was structured poorly and it didnt flow that well but the wordplay was good.....i like the lyrikal content u have theres somethin about it.....u didnt show ne real punch-lines or metaphores in this battle .......the verse was kind of original....vocab was weak didnt really see any evidence of talent in this verse so ill give you an overall vote 5/10
Overall=5/10

The Flash.......
This verse was one of the best out of the battle ive voted on with u in them u showed some SKILL in this one.....some advice is to keep the verses shorter and more packed with punches and multies...when u type a long verse it spread you talent ...which makes the power of your verse decrease...but besides that this had good flow to it.....good punches...was feelin it the whole way through an im gonna have to go with you on this one my overall vote is 6 out of 10
overall=6/10

Vote:The Flash