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Voted For: WORDPLAYA
Influence-you had some good vocab. but some of your punches were off.......and most of your lines were played out...you used just two rhymin words every two lines....your closer was terrible....but your opener was tight....Monster Mash lol....
WORDPLAYA-i liked ya word play on dis you didnt use just two rhymin words, ya opener was tight, and so was ya closer,
all around good verse.......and to me it was pretty one sided...
V/WORDPLAYA
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