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Old 09-03-04, 03:31 PM   #7
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everybody on rv hate's UR TEXT da ppl want dis fag gon.....
look at ya "s/n" u like da "CROSS DRESS" n get ya "drag-on"
haha nice start...

beef with da king dem heata's a ring all ppl by u a target...
y do u use em again all dem bar's u "recycle" is "garbage"...

ha nice hit.....
all key'ed dickhead but i could write,so whut if u could fight..
tired of ppl like u held a gun so now "day" fukkin "suge-night"
(day..they)
eeeh not feeling it....
play hard...but a box n a grave yard where shook g's is stored
drag's a scary dude ya'll "bush" a neva send dis "pussy" da war
good

dis guy is just sweet..fukk it ima tuck then ride with da heat..
fukk "dreamn bout fixin easter eggs" u gon "die in ya sleep"
preety good

drag suck da fukk just dont kno,y's he discussin his slow flow
10-7 n da only reason u beat r-rated was bcuzz of a no show
weak ending, personal none the less but wasnt a hard hit....

7.5 *preety decent punches in there.....* ( we should battle)



Da King of Punchlines yo ass is trippin
Da King don't mean how many times yo ass was hittin
wasnt feeling this.....

my opener is eNUFF SAID take ya ass 2 bed
u lyrics BULLshit dats why i attack when i RED(read)
ok

im taking blows 2 da head no i mean my dick
so like 'REVLON' my nigga i 'stick' ya 'lip'(s)
eeeh weak......

make hit backflips wit tactics like gymnastics
metaphorically givin u da boot dawg enjoy ya last trip
ok that was better......

smash diss mash diss cat like IDAHO POTATOES
mold n fold every bar ya spit as if its Playdo
repeat? ok hit but played concept....

told u i was rusty u believed get da fuck outta here
bitch nigga i call diss battle CRYSTAL kuz da out cum CLEAR
better ending the punchline...

but some of ya bars wasnt hitting hard ya opener was completly weak and creativeness was a factor here...
kepp elevating man, u is getting better.....

NO HATE DOGS 4-REAL..... 6.0