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Old 09-03-04, 04:17 PM   #24
~Sonofisis~
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Voted For: schema

I’ll be shocked if he even gets my verse…
Our levels are so far apart, for battle calls he has to press one first *get it*

honetly, i don't get it, and i won't rack my brain to try, u should of made it simple, simplicity is king.. 5/10

never readin ya verses, so you best practice
i'm your worst nightmare... so you'll wake up on a wet mattress *lol*

why would it be wet? 5/10

floor schema wit advanced weaponry my damn telepathy
will end a premonition so damn perplexingly....
Nastrodamus'll look like just some bearded man next to me
*danm*

not feelin, no real diss to him, plus you used those big words just to rhyme, they were forced.. 6/10

on some sarcophogus shit when I splatter on ya flows
can't out wit me if Egyptians started pullin brain matter outcha nose *ouch*

no punch, nice wording tho, but bad structure.. where the personals & punches.. 6/10

dump this hoe 2 do the film industry a favor when I repel 'em
cuz Kodak would go outta business....
trying to helpin' ya skill level develope BITCH*get it*

finally, this was your best line man.. 8/10


it took us a while to find a council cat to verse you
sorry...its just eighty percent of our crew's done merked you...

haha, nice personal.. 7/10

i know the truth hurts duke...but you came at me so Im not gon stop
especially when ya records got more 5-0's then a donut shop...

i don't get it, his record is 2-1? unless he reset it.. you should of explained it at the bottom.. 5/10

you not gon pop...youre garbage...nineteen losses do the math
youve been here a month...that means youve gotten merked every day and a half...

even though i can't see his old record, that is a ill concept you came up wit.. 7.5/10

and when you back out this shit I want that thousand quick...pay yo bill
if you aint scared then why you keep duckin shit like a tornado drill...


7/10, average line, made sense tho..


all in all, schema had less low score, his average was maybe 6.5, while intensifies was 6, so you guys both should of tried harder in this one, but schemas punches and personals were slightly better, so i vote for you..

holla back right here..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=147255
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