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Old 09-03-04, 04:59 PM   #8
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Voted For: Sonofisis#1

Drag~On

Stupid im #1 So No way are u takin it from me
run u over wit my car kuz u a Crash Test Dummy
->>not creative...kinda weak

im sweet as honey n u are bout as sour as Zours
while im stone cold as Steve Austin u got no Austin Powers
->>youve got a good creative mind which will serve you well but you arent doing a good job making it make sense...it sounds cool but you arent saying anything

u GoldMember never ever havin platinum song
n u couldn't get High Fives smokin weed wit a pentigon *
first line gay...none of us have a platinum song or we wouldnt be here...second line hilarious...the creativity actually connected and made sense which made all the difference...nice shit

u So Gone like Monica on ya knees lik Laweski **
artifical wit yo slangin im SubWay u Blimpy's
->>nah...

kuz i eat emcees fresh lines givin u coldcuts
fuckin 'FRUIT snack' dats why yo bitch ass gettin ROLL(ed) UP
->>shouldnt have said snack but pretty cool

n if u try 2 spit kept gaspin frustrated from neck up
blow drough hell no Jump Ropes da only way u c Duoble Dutch
->>wack


Sonofisis#1

I'm a Severe Cat, but Ears Crack When You Rap
U'r unwanted, After I Send u to God, he'll even Send u Back
->>played and didnt flow that nice

Don't Temp Me, I'll Leave You Empty like old bottles of Remmy
I'll Assasinate yo "character", like yo screen name was Kenny
->>nice flip on the kenny concept...had me laughin

To come up with that much BS, u must get the Tabloids Help
Compared to u, I'm big enough to wear the Asteriod Belt
->>haha nice

Drag~On, I'll Drag you On ground, u know i'm the Chosen One
Question: What's a good punch from Drag~On?.. A Stolen One
->>real weak set-up line but it flowed nice and i was feelin the second one the way you set it up

You a fool man, and you come off jus So Abnoxious
You're so whack, that's why your open mics get No Responses
->>blah

I really couldn't roast this Bastard Enough
I Ask, R u Gonna spit a hot flow or What? U Answer Wit What
->>ha this was cool I got it but i dont know if everyone will...first line weak again

You'll never be up to par kid, so Let It Live
The Only way you'll win is if you Bite, like Reckless Did
->>hah werd...cool shit

sonofisis your new name is way hard to spell but your verse was cooler...the setup lines were pretty weak for the most part but you had good punches that made me laugh

drag~on you are really creative but you didnt hit really hard with it...you shouldve taken more time to think it out and made your metas into punches...
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