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Old 09-03-04, 08:37 PM   #13
Magic5
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Voted For: Empire

Empire
Your lines were still a little stretched.. whatever though.. consistent structure.. flow is on target.. u had good multis.. wordplay was dope.. some of ur punches connected.. decent personals..

mic-wrecker
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines its newbish.. structure isnt consistent at all.. flow fell off.. u had good multis as well.. wordplay was simple and weak.. a few, at best, of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
both had good multis.. Empire had the better structure.. the better flow.. better wordplay.. more conecting punches.. and better personals.. so basing off of that.. Empire gets my vote..

VOTE - EMPIRE

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig.. thanx..