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Old 09-04-04, 12:18 AM   #14
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Voted For: SexyChick1338

aight payday you need some punches i think your opener was your only 1 n it was weak,remember this is a battle,sexy basically you had some ok punches best was your 4th bar,
worst 1 was your opener...try n get more personal by including his name.......both still need elevation but payday your whole verse was self glorification..not dope at all...!!
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