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Voted For: MIXTAPE
Good battle.....meatalz..good verse story was good, flow was good, structure was good, but vocab was weak in this your verse lacked complexity and u could used some more internals, and imagery was subpar but it was good jus lagging a bit.
Mixtape....good flow, structure tight as well, story was good, developed nice, imagery coulda been stronger but solid, vocab was on point nice word usuage, your verse was jus a lil bit better in some spots so u edged it.
Vote: Mixtape
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Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice
Because at the end of the day, you get what you give
So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is
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