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Old 09-04-04, 01:29 AM   #12
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Voted For: Sonofisis#1

From the beginning it was a pretty good battle. I read thru sonofisis#1s verse. Had a lot of personals, and some really nice wordplay associated with his punches. Flow was right about the same for both verses. I think its really hard to call flow in most battles other than people that are just plain wack as hell. However I got to reading and Drag On you just lost me about right here:

n u couldn't get High Fives smokin weed wit a pentigon *
u So Gone like Monica on ya knees lik Laweski **
artifical wit yo slangin im SubWay u Blimpy's
kuz i eat emcees fresh lines givin u coldcuts
fuckin 'FRUIT snack' dats why yo bitch ass gettin ROLL(ed) UP
n if u try 2 spit kept gaspin frustrated from neck up
blow drough hell no Jump Ropes da only way u c Duoble Dutch

I couldnt find a rhyme scheme, I looked a few times, other than rhyming with up there twice. No assonance, or anything. I just thought that really hurt your verse. Cause from the beginning down to that point I thought you were better than him. LoL and you killed me with the 5 sided square...I thought all squares had 4 sides LoL. But its all good no hate, I just couldnt justify giving it to you when I couldnt understand it. maybe explain a lil better next time?