Voted For: NewKid

both verses were ok.....the verse realest dropped was harder to read....i advise you to start structuring your verse.....so it easier to vote on and easier to read......you didnt have ne reap punches i dont even think i saw a metaphore in your verse i wasnt feelin you verse and it wasnt even enjoyable to read.........
overall= 3/10

On the other hand this verse wasnt much butter but atleast i seen some structure to this verse and some good attemps at metaphores.....he came with some clever punchlines and his verse flowed better then yours....and for all those reasons i give this battle to NewKid