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Old 09-04-04, 02:57 AM   #18
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Voted For: NewKid

this was a pretty decent battle,, but overall i gotta hand this one to newkid

Upfront
you had a pretty decent verse.. but something's i really wasnt feeling .. your structure was like a fukin heart beat .. that shyt kept on moving up and down . and around .. next time keep constant... punchlines were okay .. some were hitten hard but some where also played .. all of your lines were pretty lame to begin with .. The line about the mets come one man you could have worded it better.. but dont get me wrong some lines were pretty decent but you were just not .. really good in this battle, overall your verse was like a 4/10

New kid
nice verse dog.. you had a pretty decent verse.. some punchlines were really connecting hard .. and some mad alot of sense or should i say all compared to Upfront.. your strucutre was iight but the sames as upfront... Personals were decent ... overall decent nothing spetacular battle so ima have to give this one to : New kid

please hit my battle HONEST vote with troop if you have enought wins iight pz.
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