Voted For: Poet
woord... you shoulda told me you guys were gonna battle
aight
mad dog:
nice plot, except it was kinda vague at the start. No limits bro, so you can go into all the detail of how he got into the shootout, why his kids with him, n all that.. but ya didnt -_-
flow was a little choppy in parts but its all good.
Poet: At the start it was kind of bland.. good though, but not engaging, know what i mean? But after the first paragraph it got interesting. Madd plot. Flow was a little stretched, some lines.. so it sounded more poetic than rap. but i guess your name is poet... so yeah...
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Originally Posted by Poet
I get hit once in my leg.. In pain I shoot back hitting a cop straight through the head..
And blood sprays creates a mozart.. To beathoven acustic music ricocheting with lead..
Crawling on all fours.. Bleeding badly, Thought Im not a religious man Im reciting prayes..
Layed to rest to the drowning sound of rain.. Im hell bound but Im guessing nobody cares..
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^^^dope