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Old 09-04-04, 04:42 AM   #14
Tha Q
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This was feedback posted for illuson

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or a g ya corny raps might work in crawley ill have ya in the same ditch as chris farley/

ya talkin bout popin shit please the only thing ya pop is ya mas zits ill burn ya ass with lit grits/

^^^^ zit lines are played out...that was corny


923 post come to the west coast see how much ya can boast yar getin burnt like toast ya have to tell people to vote like most/

they cant do it by them selves after this im put ya boring rap style on the shelf begin for help/


^^^^ Structure is bad man...better that


mother fucker bite me i got ya ass in a choke hold fight me
look back at my battles and bite me/


^^^Not real complex
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