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Voted For: WORDPLAYA
Wordplaya got this quite easily in my opinion...Keen 2B i think you still need a lot of work on your stucture and how to use punches, personals e.t.c...i had the same problem when i 1st came here the thing is the structure is too small it does flow ok but it doesn't make much difference if the other parts of the verse like punches are included...ur verse was overall very newb but u are so you have time to work on this...don't take this as a hate vote because i'm not liking the verse...but what i'm doin is giving you some advice if u want to...write some open mics and try and work on ur wordplay and try and extend the structure while keeping the flow at a good rhythm...but now...you wont win many battles while you are dropping like that...
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Originally Posted by High Dro
furthermore, june 3rd is the only good day to be born
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^ Amen Brother ^
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Originally Posted by ∆ P E X X
i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.
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R.I.P OMB
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