Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

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Naughty

your verse didnt flow well at all....the structure was off horribly the vocab lacked i didnt see any real punches from you in this verse.....some advice is to try and make your bars longer....that will help you next battle.....you didnt have ne multies or metaphore so this verse was preety much basic so im gonna have to give u a 3 out of ten.........
Overall=3/10

Shotty

you verse was a little bit better the verse was structured well so it was easy to read......i didnt really see ne personals but u just came with better punches in this one....thats what seperated a win from a loss for you....it was your last line that seperated it....
Overall=5/10

good battle from both.......much props

when u get a chance stop by and drop a vote....thanx
Sole*