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Old 09-04-04, 10:42 AM   #10
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5 barz enough for me to slaughter this cat
so i'm gonna leave ya ass dead in the dryer at the laundry mat
u the catalyst for where i'm aiming my rhymes
so i'm gonna leave ya death on cover of the new york times
and leave blood squirting out ya head like a bottle of hines

those was 5 decent lines that equaled 2 1/2 bars not 5......
u still missing another 2 1/2????

decent flow, punches was ok i would of liked to see more, creativeness was decent all around not bad but u was missing 2 1/2 bars so u get a little more credit,

7.3



Ayo Flash prolly thinks hes nice but his votes was all lies/
after battlin me his life bout to "Flash" in front of his eyez...
decent start...

He's prolly another white kid from london who acts like a wigga/
Ur like Tyson wen i KO u in 4 i dont want no excuses NIGGA...
WHAT!!? i hope that wasnt a racial remark!!!!, weak anyways

I tear niggaz frames n leave they body full of stitches/
I'll fuckin pee on Flash like he was one of R. Kellys bitches...
ok, concept a little played thou...

My rhymes stay insane wen i dish out da pain to fuckin lames/
Its ashame, u cuddnt spit a hot bar if u was swallowin flames...
decent...

Its a wrap for dis battle so hand me down my crown wit the win/
I'll wire your fuckin jaw like dis is Kanye West checkin in...
decent ending....

all around not a bad verse 1 weak bar and i hope that wasnt a racial remark...

7.5