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Old 09-04-04, 09:17 PM   #15
E Looch
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Voted For: Trooper

archangel-ya verse wasnt really on point to me here had some nice wordplay in the first line that was nice but the punch was garbage then the midget line was ight everything else wasnt even really a punchline to me just like u was spittin some shit nothin really goin hard at him work on constent wordplay threw ya verse get more personals and fix ya structure that shit is kinda hard to read brah

trooper- finally u battlin in elevated your best way to get noticed u dont need o put all them quotation marks on ya shit though pretty easy to catch things had nice wordplay threw ya whole verse that was a good thing some of ya punchs didnt really connect to me others where pretty nice though but work on more personals and try not to do your 2 lines spacing that shit aint needed brah

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