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Old 09-04-04, 10:10 PM   #13
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I think schema has got this one.... his flow was ebtter and he had more wordplay....... he also had some good punches..... I liked your last like.... that was a nice ending!!!

NoMercy... yhou werent bad.... alright wordplay... i didnt realy like your structure.... but some of it was ok..... you had a couple good punches that i liked.. but your last line was too spaced out.. your first line was short and your last one was like 2 x longer... But good job

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