Sup, sorry its been a long time since I actually replied to anything, i-net werent connecting properly etc... This is iLL, its a good read, intellectual, with a deep meaning and some powerful lines... The concept was well thought and well displayed, you showed some creativity and the depth was showing throughout, a lot of emotion and thought put into the ideas... Liked that, rhythm and flow, no problem, the syllables were correct on the multies and it showed through with the internals, the flow was smooth and flawless... Vocab was extreme, the knowledge was there, sometimes thought a more individual and simplistic style woulda delivered your message more clearer, thats why this aint been critiqued... Your wordplay was on point, metaphors, some similies and this helped to work the mind and expand the mental... A very good piece, a decent read, thought it was flawless in places and some areas open my eyes man... Keep dropping the gems sun...

Peez...