This was a solid piece, good use of wordplay and rhythm seemed quite sharp all the way through... I werent feeling the format, of caps locc, and it seemed like it was shoved on one line and this made it difficult to read... Jus some tips for the future posts... The content had no substance, but it come thicc with the wordplay and some punches, not something that im usually feeling though... Noticed the use of multies and this helped to keep the rhythm together, some internal rhymes woulda made it stronger and more solid... I think ya need to give your flow something to talk about, make the reader think a little, a story line with a twist or something, jus need originality... I liked the odd vocab in this piece it made it stable, your style is nice, you jus gotta push forward with it... Keep spitting and elevating, a decent drop...

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