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Old 07-08-02, 07:46 PM   #4
RhetoriX
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Tell you the troof I dont relate, but I dont spit about guns, money, etc... I aint from the hood, but that dont mean im not real... I liked some parts of this, the imagery was vivid, you created a good mind picture, more metaphors woulda strengthed your flow and gave it some more depth... The rhythm was on point, noticed some multies here and there, and mosly everything stayed on point... Vocab was good throught, balanced prolly the best word for it, it was well used and halped with the imagery... A decent drop, jus try to incorporate more metaphors and wordplay into pieces like this... It was decent and solid, like to see some more, keep spitting and elevating...

Peez...
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