Nice wordplay and punches, and you got a good style to your flow, consistent rhythm... Didnt like how ya formatted did, space ya work out and ish... Also didnt like how it had no substance, I thought you were gonna take this somewhere, the ending seemed a bit rushed, and I thought you coulda twisted it to something iLL... There was jus nothing to it, noticed the punches and wordplay... Vocab was aight, nothing extreme, nothing basic, it was solid and aight, keep spitting and elevating, try working on something that would be interesting to read... Keep em coming...

Peez...