Liked the wordplay in this man, and some of the lines were powerful, used a quicc rhyme scheme that I thought was quite simplistic... The multies were decent and helped the rhythm, but I thought the bars were too short and it made it slightly choppy... The vocab was nicely used, some good knowledge words, aint no problems there... Wordplay and some punches were nice man, aint no substance to this though, it was same old, gets a bit boring, I read bout 5 of there already... Think you should spit something original, open some eyes and ish... This was solid though, keep spitting and elevating...

Peez...