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You lots are UK heads, aint noticed theres so many on this board... Keep the UK alive, na'mean... Aight, this is a meaningful drop, it was good in some places, sometimes I werent feeling it... The rhyme scheme for both of ya verses worked well, the internals and multies showed through and this gave you a flawless style and smooth rhythm... The wordplay was aight, some of the lines were hella overplayed though, you gotta come original and knowledgable when dropping wordplay, more metaphors woulda made this piece deeper... Vocab was aight, some places it was used well to its potential, it was working throughout and ya showed a good knowledge... The concept was iLL, thats what I was feeling the mos, something original and comical, keep concepts coming like this, I enjoyed this read... Keep spitting and elevating, and make it U K everyday...
Peez...
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