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Damn there 'nuff UK heads repping here... Aight this was a nice piece, the rhythm was on point and it kept consistent, a nice use of multies... Some internals woulda smoothed everything else up, but ya looked at the syllables and the end product was good... The wordplay was iLL, some of it was funny, it caught my eye with the knowledge dropped, some powerful lines... The vocab coulda been improved, more knowledge terms and this woulda been straight... Werent feeling the concept though, I think you could spit with some actual depth if ya put your mind to it, drop some substance here, mos def a good read though, keep em coming... Keep spitting and elevating...
Peez...
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