Voted For: ProVerse

ProVerse
structure is good.. flow is on target.. u had a few multis.. imagery was decent.. the topic didnt really allow for much anyway though.. emotion was alright.. u went about the topic at a somewhat of a creative angle.. it worked out for ya..

PlaTinuM_
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. no imagery.. no emotion.. i dont even see how u went at the topic at all.. just.. wackness..

Overall
both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. ProVerse had more multis.. as well as more imagery.. and more emotion.. and he went that the topic better.. so basing off of that.. ProVerse gets my vote..

VOTE - PROVERSE