(And I am mostly giving feedback based on a deeper question of content..) The rhyme in itself was not bad or anything, but the content (once again, reminiscent of Eminem) would make me wonder,"Is she just mad? Does she know the power of words?" You only have one mother and I hear that when you lose that one (even if you were not always on the best terms) that there is nothing at all in this world that can convey the feeling of lonliness that comes along with it..

Those whom I have spoken with who have lost their mothers say that no matter what, a hole from the lost of a mother is made in your heart and nothing can ever fill it, ever. So... While you and your mother may not be on the best terms, always understand that you only have one and you two do not really click, then it is natural for you to not be the closest . However, you should atleast respect the power of words as well as your mother enough to not wish for things that you really do not mean on a long-term level. Just take a moment to sit down and ask yourself what you would do if your mother were to be taken away from you. Would you be able to support yourself? Would you be caught up in a lot of guilt from the things that you've said?

You are young.. What you perceive to be so severely important to you today will be of little or no importance to you tomorrow so remember to remind yourself that you are still growing and that you have seen neither all the joy NOR all the pain that your journey of life can help you experience.

This was not at all said to diss you, this was said to help you remember that life on this realm is short.. U might want to maximize it and treat yourself as well as others with respect and love so that you may exit this Earth with very little regrets... Take care.

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