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Old 09-05-04, 11:55 AM   #8
E Looch
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Voted For: lyricalflowz

lyrical flowz- stretched ass lines take about 5 words out of each line and it would be alot better wordplay was decent punchs where ight had a few personals just need to work on wording your punchs better an takinth unessecery words out that just stretch out the punch creativitie could be alot better instead of usin the same old topics and personlas are always nice add a few more with a long verse

big papa- LMAO! you got flow thats the best thing in your verses punchs are kinda weak have penty of personals though but your shit seems like an audio diss not a battle verse should get wordplay in your verses and turn em into punchs just elevate your punchs to go along with your flow could be pretty nice

vote lyrical flowz for better punchs and wordplay and a better overall verse
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