Voted For: For$akeN

forsaken- lol funny verse the opener is funny but i think thats a fuse box the blind line was nice to but i still think u should get more wordplay in your verses bunch of personals in this battle though funny 1s to others where kinda weak like the phone i didnt like to much overall though a pretty nice verse just dissin his pic

empire- vocab started off good then u kinda went away from it personals where average u had a lot of internal rhymes though that kept a tight flow but i think ya punchs lacked here your wordplay was ight didnt have much of it again u should add that to your verse more u had less lines to spit an i still dont think u had that good of averse and u even fed off his when u put that link line in there your closer could have been nice but worded wrong overall work on wordplay and wording your punchs to hit harder everything else is ight

vote forsaken for an overall better verse

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