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Old 09-05-04, 01:18 PM   #13
Eclipsik
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yo shit was weak and ultra simple. You didn't put much thought into this at all

not much more to say execpt this retard just got 0-2 to his record//
imma trip the muther fuker with a cord//
^please don't tell me this is the best you have to offer. Please.

Your stuff had no punches, no wordplay(none good). Had no flow. and "luda(diss)?WTF?

Plat

um this was also weak, but it was a helluva lot better than the competition. you had flow and a little punch, like a couple soft left hooks. Neither of you had any real personals though or wordplay, but plats had better structure too.
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