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Voted For: X-NaUgHtY-bOy-X

yo dis guy wanting to battle me thinking is all good//
yo i will get da muther fucking nigga face in put it in the mud//
[No real punch, just some weak disses.]
this is a face guy trying to rap iima taker dis fake rapper down//
he no im gonna win dis shit and hes trying no to frown//
[Man common, this was wack.]
this is gay i dont even have to try to win i got this battle hands down//
man he wins this it wud be lucky and id be outta town//'
[Ok This was better, but still wack.]
but i no dis fucked up retard wud never win me in a battle lyk dis//
i wud kick his ass like i was luda(chris)//(chris)=my name so i put it in bracets
[How da fucc do we know if thats your real name, no good.]
ever diss hes dose its gonna go like a bullet n miss//
miss is best abilty i always hit coz im lyk luda(diss)//
[Again with the luda, this aint good.]
not much more to say execpt this retard just got 0-2 to his record//
imma trip the muther fuker with a cord//
[This was so wack, but ok man.]
yo imma excited to c da vote 5-0 be4 we even started//
n i got the win lyk this guy is retarded//(witch his is)
[Not a good closer, real soft punch.]

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shyt so you a new naughty boi stepin up da block//
ima make ya rhymez embarressed makin u feel like u wanna stop//
[Weak Opener, real weak]
you know you cant beat tha multi platinum//
your shyt iz goin down like im attackin em//
[Not good, real soft.. better for a freestyle]
you best be loggin out n neva comin back//
tha only thing ull get iz ur lack of slack//
[Omg how wack! common man.]
I dont like tha way you flow//
i got 1 to da 2 to da 3 of ur sistaz they str8 h0ez//
[Crazy, wackness is in the air in this battle.]
to you iz wat ima be disrepectful-too//
your rhymez are top rejectful-foo//
[Nope, atempted a multy and it was not good.]
stupid nigga your ass aint gon elevate//
ma last wurrdz is dat ur neva gon get a date//
[This was the weakest closer seen in RV hestory.]

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Vote = X

Why?... = X had some weak punches just like Plat, but X's punchjes actually landed, and made some sort of sence.