awesome peice... the rhyming scheme was outta control... but the flow was amazin, the words were meaningfull and tru, and the emotion was strong and deep.. the message was a good one, and i loved this whole poem... fave lines:

The years brought differences in seasons,
love and hate, then whispers to rage;
Ignore the truth and find out own reasons,
banish light and with the darkness we bathe;
We the victums of dispise fight with our claws...
yet the rain will fall...

keep it flowin!