over rated responces. cons- vocals too high, flow was strugglin towards the beginning. your secondary vocals, the ones that overlap were not linked right, they would be either before or after the words they are spose to link with. pro's, lyrics were intelligent, good meta's n punches, vocals shine better at some parts than others. flow was on point at certain times. which makes it all in all a pretty good track. i would say my best bit of advice is to work on a consistant flow. stay up