i peeped ur song-- live my life... took my grl wasn't workin....

i liked ur lyrics alot actually....

but i kinda crunched some lines.... if u work on breathing while u rap u wont have to take those breaths which lead to gaps inbetween your lines.. ya feel me?... nice though i think ur lyrics are ur strong points and nice chrorus's....

gook look though keep elevatin u got potentiontal

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