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Voted For: mic-wrecker
ILLegitimate:
You did good with the topic, but u were bouncing all over the place. You did good on the schizophrenic part, cuz it sounds mad confusing. If u could have put more info in this, it would have been tight.
mic-wrecker:
I liked everything about yours. I followed every line with ease (even though it was lengthy). It had a lot of emotion in it, and it sounded like it was a true story. U got my vote.
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