Voted For: mic-wrecker

This is one sided here. mic-wrecker had a much better verse. I loved how the story line led to a twist. It was a nice ending. Throughout I continued to lose track of the flow though. It seems it has structure, but I couldn't match the structure to the flow, know what im sayin?

illegitamate, you just didn't have enough details. You came a little trite and predictable. Just too simple for the topic at hand. Even though the flow was nice. I liked that line about droppin lines and prayers though. It was a decent effort. you get some props but mic-wrecker gets my vote