Voted For: Poet

ok.this was nice by both.
structure...
first off poet yours instantly looked the better verse,very neat and tidy srtructure...the small writing works real well,looks neat any gets u more complex vocab into a verse..without lookin stretched.
mad dog...try getin urs like that.(i know im gona)...
its notin to really vote on,but it jus gives u that beta first impression, looks more proffesional,polished and more appealing.

vocab...i think poet took it here also..more complex word usage, which helps a topical verse cos it adds more depth...n complexity is harder to achieve.

imagery... again im gon hve to go wit poet...i felt his was more in depth...he delved deeper into the mind and emotions going on...it was a real deep verse.mad dog urs was gud too, but like i said i felt poet had u in this area.

enjoyment
ok havin said that i did actually enjoy mad dogs more....i felt it was easier to follow and although a simpler piece overall tha poets....i enjoyed it more..
but enjoyments a personal thing,n thas jus my opinion...

multies.../fboth fairly even,,,,,,id say poet took it here because of his vocab......his rhymin was more complex.....
although the flow was about tied.

overall my vote is poet.
mad dog u had a nice verse...but i think poet jus about took it in every area....it was overall a more in-depth and complex piece.
vote-poet....

by the way.whoeva wins,id like ta battle.gud drops
peace

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