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Old 09-06-04, 11:10 AM   #21
LEazy
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Voted For: ILLegitimate

Nice flow...on topic...and nice structure. Some lines mic-wrecker had were hot. But there was times in my mind you went off the subject. Your structure made me abit woozy. It was alot to read and bunched up. But...don't take this as me saying your verse was trash cause it wasn't. Hands down you had a nice verse. I think because ILL stuck on topic and had a sorta story going it was hot.
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