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Old 09-06-04, 12:05 PM   #10
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in my eyes telling people wat there doin right is'nt a way of helping them,
tell them wat there doin wrong n they'll focus on that rather than them focusing on wat there doin right which doesnt need improvment......

see if i wouldve said your vocabs good n your structure aight...

guarenteed you'd be focusin on your rhymes n lines which in reality arent the pieces that need work.....bring wats wrong to a persons attention n it'll stick with em....
prays them n they'll jus get a big head..........philosophy 101
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