ok e alot of your shit aint rhyme here and it had good punches but no real personals or good disses it would have made a good punchline verse flow was ok and structure and vocab was good a 5/10

what the flyin fuck.....

CAN YOU NOT READ?
the whole lookin for E like eye Exams....(E Looch) you moron...
and the whole....your my Phan....(fan)Phantom....you moron...
Why are people like this so god damn bull-headed....
read the verse's.....not the last word of each line!

WORDS DONT HAVE TO LOOK ALIKE TO RYHME!!!!!